grading my draft

[bryanbutler]

thanks again. lol

i really want to thank all those who have commented and offered some insight. i think i have stumbled onto a great site here. i don't know who you all are, but it appears as though there's a few writers/sports contributors or something going on here. thanks again for the constructive criticism, thoughts, and opinions. i think i'll stick around a bit.

shhhh. don't tell anybody.

oh, wait, tell everybody - we need more folks! ...